Fun Fact: some snakes can hold their breath for upwards of 30 minutes.

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Pfft, oh man those last two panels.

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Damn, that last panel contrast, kind of a boner killer.

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Kinda janky for a straight-forward mind break story. The first half is pretty much all drug usage, the second half is all bukkake scenes and the ending is just a boner killer. Either go all the way with guro or don't bother.

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...can you make claims of a 'beautiful' kunoichi on the first page when they don't show any of her until page three?

I know it is kinda implied that she is pretty (given the stock character and genre) and it obviously refers to her due to context.... but were you thinking about her beautfy at that moment?

I would go with 'cunning', 'deadly', 'stealthy', 'hidden', etc. at that point.

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The chief had some Orochimaru jutsu I see

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LMFAO Manga201 comment though.

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This was actually kinda hot.

In fact, I'm now considering commissioning a Oneshot from Yuugiri(the One from Hotmilk September 2014 looks tasty).

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i was expecting the ninja can kill the old man finally....

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Personally, I was hoping that, because of the way the story was set up, she would use the torture as an excuse to sound genuine and start a war with a totally unrelated faction--which I guess might have happened, but we can never say for sure.

Still, good art even if the themes were all over the place.

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For some reason I kept expecting a twist where she had some kind of vagina poison that'd be the end of them all.

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@lemeres
You are right, but i think 'beautiful' is better in this situation, it "arouse" more the reader than 'cunning, 'deadly', etc. and this is the function of the hentai.

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