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(COMIC1☆5) [Nama Cream Biyori (Nanase Meruchi)] Boku wa Sena shika Iranai 3 (Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai) [English] [yume123]

(COMIC1☆5) [生クリームびより (ななせめるち)] 僕は星奈しか要らない 3 (僕は友達が少ない) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2015-09-07 19:44
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:20.27 MB
Length:27 pages
Favorited:280 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.90

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Posted on 07 September 2015, 20:26 UTC by:   spierdalacz    PM
Score +158
Cancerous font, untranslated bubbles (like on 9th and 23rd page), lack of any typesetting... I can't comment on translation, but if the editing is anything to judge by, it's Laruffi's level.
Posted on 07 September 2015, 21:02 UTC by:   werty101    PM
Score +49
This "translation" is a joke.
Posted on 07 September 2015, 21:26 UTC by:   kebab4you    PM
Score +6
Did you really have to shorten words? Also the font is odd.
Posted on 07 September 2015, 21:29 UTC by:   XCX Scans    PM
Score +22
Laruffi actually does decent editing... Though translations are trash.
So.... Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah.
Posted on 07 September 2015, 21:33 UTC by:   qwertydude    PM
Score +14
It was better untranslated.
Posted on 07 September 2015, 21:45 UTC by:   yume123    PM
Score +77
This is my first time to translate.

It is actually not good.

Sorry... ><
Posted on 07 September 2015, 22:39 UTC by:   KouTenka    PM
Score -2
I lol'd on page 4: "Nooo :D"
Posted on 07 September 2015, 22:46 UTC by:   Hectotane    PM
Score +18
More can be done, Yume123.

It's not "fuckface Laruffii" level, but more can be done. :)
Posted on 08 September 2015, 05:29 UTC by:   pusangcat    PM
Score +7
You need editor friend to have a decent shorten sentence hehehe you should not follow laruffi when it's still early for ya :D I like second part though.
Posted on 08 September 2015, 07:02 UTC by:   happyjeans    PM
Score +17
translations by [DUWANG]
Posted on 08 September 2015, 19:15 UTC by:   Firseal    PM
Score +6
For a first time translator, this isn't that bad. You need better editing, or an editor, but learning is never a bad thing and more translators is great.

Keep translating, and see if you can't scare up an editor. I apologize for those who aren't willing to cut someone learning the craft some slack.
Posted on 09 September 2015, 04:37 UTC by:   tgsos    PM
Score +8
More translators is a good thing. Laruffii's problem is that he never learns, refuses to learn, and doesn't even admit he sucks. He just blames the "haters" and keeps crapping out non-translations. It's nice to see that yume123 isn't like that. Keep it up, and find someone to edit for you on the forums.
Posted on 09 September 2015, 23:12 UTC by:   BillNine10    PM
Score +19
I can't fap to this, the guy is not fat, old, and ugly enough.
Posted on 10 September 2015, 23:50 UTC by:   Megaton    PM
Score +15
I see you tried to pass this off to Dynellen originally for his bounty...poor form sire.

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