Posted on 12 September 2015, 22:51 UTC by: l4chuga
Score +5
This is pretty decent, though I think it dragged on a little too long after the shrinking part.
Base +5
Posted on 05 November 2017, 23:44 UTC by: imercenary
Score +9
Good stuff, but overly drawn out.
That said, its a shame the artist (at least on their deviantart page) disappeared. Theres just 2 additional pages there and the newest one is over a year old.