Bleh, self-insert OC. Eh, whatever. Can't have everything.
Also, minor nitpick, the final panel is kinda skeezy, especially since *he's* saying it instead of Luna/Celestia. Obviously *he* wants to do that again; it's hotter if the *girls* want to do it again.
No person in their right mind would run away from a threesome with hot chicks, especially if they are single.
Base +5
Posted on 11 January 2016, 18:23 UTC by: Derpy Doo
Score +5
I'm pretty sure I'm not the only noticing this, but this art looks a bit... off, in places.
Base +5
Posted on 11 January 2016, 22:27 UTC by: somnophile
Score +6
The one thing I do love about this is that it's just such pure self-indulgence. Written to please the author and no one else. The fact that you think it's hot can make it hot.
The fact that they made an entire comic on their own is great, and if they keep at it, I bet soon they'll start to be good in other ways.
@somnophile: Only if they work on improving the writing. Page one was an utter dialogue disaster. OC insert is obvious, Luna is suddenly a cowardly child because the boy she likes is "a chick magnet", and a dozen other problems. Sword Art Online had less Mary Sue, and Kirito's middle name is "Plot convenience."