Source: Young Comic 2013-03

An updated version of one of the earliest stories I worked on. I noticed that some of my original translation was very liberal or had mistakes, so I fixed those parts. Most fonts have been changed as well. While it's not drastically different, I hope you may enjoy it again!

Credits:
TL & ED: freudia
QC: Cadenza

Original credits:
TL & ED: freudia, QC: AoC, Special thanks: jfji552, Sanakan

I remember this tan girl goodness.

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I've never felt so betrayed by a final page.
Everything I know is a lie.

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I love that you took the time to go back and edit your older translation.
Thanks a million.

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What a twist!

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Very cute. Loved it :)

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What are the odds? Real life says never. Real life sucks so hard.

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Muffdiver884 : She's not white, she's Japanese. Or are asian people white now? Also, learn what a tan is. Are tans skin tone appropriation in this day and age too?

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that final page...

o....okaaaaaaaay(?)

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"Being sent to this place in the middle of nowhere feels like a demotion."........ "Oh wait, I see someone in the distance! He's holding a flag with I.S.I.S. on it. Huh... wonder what that means?"

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"Your Juices are overflowing like a spring at an oasis..."

Your lines are corny like a Nebraskan field.

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So, the Middle Eastern cutie ended up being just a tanned Japanese girl. Indeed... I feel so betrayed.

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I feel like her losing her sexy tan is a terrible downgrade.

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It's like the fair skinned alt pallet on Ramlethal, what's the fucking point?

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So a tanned asian women looks like exactly as a arabian women? It's good to know. :)

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So she's not Middle Eastern but Japanese...
WELL NO COMPLAINTS HERE, she's still sexy AF. And the tanned skin can always be gained with a few days/weeks worth of sunny beach.
And she's still that lovely girl, so...STILL WIN.

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