(C88) [ネダオレ (あやね)] いつか円環で会えたら (魔法少女まどか☆マギカ)
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/839475/

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Oh my fucking god I've been looking for this doujin for forever! I couldnt find it, even raw, and nownits translated!? What miracle is this!?

Whoever did this, thank you very much. Where did you find it?

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Please need the version with the extra body fluids!!!

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How bittersweet, got some cute MamiNagi too.

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so sayaXkyouko is ok, but homuXmadoka is not?

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"Editing the original doujinshi because I personally do not like certain things in it" is a bullshit move. When other uploaders have even added censorship because they didn't like a rape scene, for example, their galleries have been expunged.

What if someone really likes Ayane for the sweat, for example? I really, REALLY appreciate that you translated this, but why should other people conform to your tastes only because you translated it?

What I really mean is, tk-910 you should upload the unedited doujinshi, or otherwise someone else will upload it anyway.

@ tk-910 Yes, I noticed that you provided the download link for the unedited pages. That was not my point at all.

Last edited on 06 April 2016, 22:34 UTC.

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Thanks. Could you share the RAW too?

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Thanks a lot that was a great doujinshi! Do you have any plans to translate some of Ayane's other Madoka yuri doujins?

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you need to QC your work, it has several errors.

pg 07, "our relationships are also be reset"
take out "be"

pg 10, "you were the only to react so slowly,"
"the only one"

"I'll fix it will go a lot smoother"
>to go a lot smoother
>so it will go a lot smoother

pg 20, "Don't do private your affairs out in the open!"
"Don't do your private affairs out in the open!"

pg 21, "cloning and mental telepathy go mixed in too."
>"got" not go

"the strongest ability out of all us..."
>"all of us..."

pg 26, "that nice old lady when I was kid"
>was a kid

pg 27, "

pg 35, "I get to how well"
>get to see how well

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While I prefer the more clean version, the artist's original version should be the one posted here while the edited version should be the appendage.

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I would much rather have the raws than any unedited translated copy. Why post a translation without uploading raws?

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Upload unedited raw please. I prefer reading doujins in Japanese as do a lot of other people.

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I think the edit should be disclosed in the tittle, not at the end. It doesn't feel fair to the reader.
Or then like anya_ said original could be posted here, and the edited version should be in the link.

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sgt_akiyama has a point, although since tk-910 provided a download link for the other pages, it's just a question of uploading a new gallery and keep this one as a redraw or cleaned or whatever added to the title...

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@ tk-910
I was referring to this:
What I really mean is, tk-910 you should upload the unedited doujinshi, or otherwise someone else will upload it anyway.
Uploading it here instead of mediafire don't have any demerit after all, and you end up with 2 galleries

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