translated and edited by: darknight

page 17 fix

This was so surreal, I like it.

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I've never seen the source material. I have no idea what's going on.

10/10 Saya is best girl.

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I completely have no idea of what going on but i enjoyed it a bit too much.

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A whole new definition of eating dick... Now with strawberry and chocolate flavor!

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OMG I LOVE STRAWBERRY YAN YAN SNACKS

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Well, I guess I'll never eat another pack of Yan Yan again.

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wow, Hirame can do solo works!

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>Hirame doing Dagashi

MY DICK IS LOLLIPOP HARD NOW GOD FUCKING DAMN

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I love how all of the Dagashi Kashi doujins write the characters perfectly.

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This is a vivid representation of selective reproduction competition.

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We need more candy girl stuff.

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Page 6 is also known as the "Houston Hard Hat". Don't believe me? Look it up on Urban Dictionary

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Ah, after 10,000 years a Hirame TL! It's time to cum in loads!

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And nobody points out the ceiling candy-coated dickpunch. Alright.

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what the fuck did I just read?
I kinda like it, would like more of that stuff.

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I'm already cracking up at the character intro on p.3

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The legend is back

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The best combination ever.

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"The left hand of god". MASTERPIECE

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Great job translating this. Keep up the good work.

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Around Snacks, don't relax.

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This was hilarious, Hirame so good!

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I can't stop laughing enough to fap dammit!

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whenever I laugh, my dick go limp =))

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I don't even. Like what? I just... WHAT?

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YAN YANS WERE THE FUCKING BOMB

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I need more Hotaru-dan... best title character.

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That goddamn Dick to the face in the last pages
I laughed so hard I got another boner.

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I liked it already when it was not translated, and now the translation proves it's a fucking masterpiece! It's long since I last laughed so hard at a doujinshi. The casual way Saya joins, Kokonotsu's monologues, his face in the last panel of p.22... you'll hardly get a boner out of it but who cares!

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THIS IS JUST TOO FUNNY I CAN'T EVEN FAP TO IT

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Hey those are Yamyam sticks. We still produce that in Indonesia.

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I... don't know. This might be a bit too zany and random for me. I get wanting to get straight to the sex and having some good jokes and all but.. something about the way this was laid out bugged me. First of all, at the start when Hotaru made Kokunotsu drop the Yan Yan Dipsticks. It made me gasp and point at the screen saying "She would not do that!" Then two random bodyguard dudes show up and it looks like an NTR situation, which isn't bad in and of itself. NTR situations actually get me pretty hot. But it's NTR and then he gets Saya's pussy and then gets this acting uber manly revenge ahegao sex and.. yeah.. Most of the personalities were spot on but the situations were way off and off the wall implausible for anything but a weird dream sequence.

Art 7. Plot 3. Translation 4. True to character 4. All out of 10.

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Cool story bro.

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what a great dad

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Great story, thanks for the translation

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