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This is extremely cute so far! My advice would to at least add in some sorta panel with a type of sexual anything... be it one of them walking out of the shower nude or anything of the such... it's a good series, but showing a bit of body helps make the next page all the more to wait on >3>

Base +6, R34VinylScratch +4, Shouta Hamasaki -5

Dammit, you cant give us over 12 pages of backstory for the couple to then crush our hearts. (Thing hasnt gone down yet, but he did say 'dont make my mistake').

Also, by the time we get to the actual couple, if the author even plans to, we are not going to be invested in those two.

Base +5, 13inch +6, raichupal -7

Very good story, I follow the truth from our secret and this is equally good or better, perhaps by the colors, which the other did not have, but the story is just as great, Upgrade to next page please!

Base +2, raichupal +7, KillzonX +7

The story continues. And is getting good~

Base +3, raichupal +7

Panel 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CR5x3BAelk

Base +6

oh man this is not going to end happy. I wnat ti to and I am not into yaoi that much but the storyhas me and for it to end sad would be messed up

Base +9

wowo a new page appeared , can't wait to see more I really like this story .

Base +3

This is one of if not my favorite comic and i've been following it's progress for what I think is around two years I love this story I love the artist/author but it gets released at a dreadfully slow rate and that's not great considering where the story is and what type of comic it is I just sincerely hope that it gets released at a more constant and hastened speed

Base +5

it's been like maybe 2 or a year for this to be updated. Finally!!

Base +1, Schmoritfff -6, SSSdriver +6

This is going to end sadly, dammit.

I REALLY hope the flashback ends and he goes to find him...

Base +6, SSSdriver +6, Foo Min -8, kobezikang +2

oh no! They are cute couple……PLEASE!

Base +2, Mr. Xecret +6, Jin.H. +7

I'm going to kill someone if isaac died...

Base +6, kobezikang +2

Noooooooooo!!!!

Base +3, Kyago +2

Unfortunately LazyHorse is going to likely have to kill someone... note that Ivan wears the same bell that Isaac tried giving him as a gift now.

Base +1

He is not dying. No!!!!! I can deal with them breaking up, but ending up like that? NO ... no... I don't want him dead :(

Edit:Okay ... Cool he died I'm done I'm so done.*cries*

Last edited on 04 June 2016, 20:30 UTC.

Base +6, AlanB +7

Oh god, this story is so good ... i need more, please.

Base +2

My only response can only be explained as "Aww~...."

Base +6

Part 3 : One Wish (Final)
/g/1428168/ddce49c7bb/

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English original version: /g/941930/e9c5f20cd8/ (you are here)
Russian translated version: /g/1626479/460b8c0e94/
Chinese translated version: /g/1220593/c5af230639/

Base +8