This CG set is really surreal... I mean that as a compliment, though. The dialogue is well thought-out, even if it has plenty of issues with grammar and realism. And above all, it's unpredictable.

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Hi myoxy thanks for commenting. I´m not very good creating dialogues even more in english cause I´m not a native english speaker, I speak spanish and I can only use a very basic english, however my intention is make something which every people around the world can read but I accept I can have grammatical mistakes and lack of english colloquialism. I´m glad you think my work is surrealist and unpredictable cause that is my intention. I don´t wanna use cliches and I´m tired of the same stories which always ending in men fucking women. my works are pure female domination and men being humiliated. probably next month will be the next chapter. I am thinking make 2 or 3 more and the final will be very surreal I guess

Last edited on 17 July 2016, 22:38 UTC.

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i want moreee

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I will start to make the part 3 soon. I don´t know if it will the last chapter or not cause it´s very difficult for me make this, I need a lot of time but I promise next chapter will contain surprises.

Again people, sorry for typos, thanks to an north american friend of mine I found out there are a lot of typos in my dialogues, that is of course, I´m not a native speaker, I promise I will try to reduce the typos the most possible next chapter

Last edited on 21 September 2016, 23:46 UTC.

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