...Is this actually English?

Base +6, kingofptw +6, letoplel +12, kingejn +6, Hyoros -8

What the? Why is this tagged as Tokisaki Kurumi when the one having sex is someone else?

Base +11

Engrish to the nth power

Base +5, Hyoros -8

Thank you kindly

Base +9, Hyoros +8

The "poor grammar" tag is defined as a gallery "containing at least 10 grammatical or spelling errors per 40 pages." This one fulfills that requirement on the first two pages alone.

Here's a proofread version of those two pages.

Page 3

Panel 1: Bringing me over to a place like this...
Panel 1: What do you want from me?
Panel 3: AST codename: "Diva".
Panel 4: A spirit that was originally a human.
Panel 5: What is it you want?
Panel 6: Your angel is "Gabriel",
Panel 7: while mine shoots bullets that control time.

Page 4

Panel 1: I want to test one of my bullets on you.
Panel 2: I'd like you to have it.
Panel 3: Don't worry.
Panel 3: This is all...
Panel 4: for the sake
Panel 4: of this world.

@ArcadiaM:

Finding a good translator is a difficult task. It's much easier to hire a decent proofreader.

Last edited on 20 July 2016, 03:18 UTC.

Base +22, KillCarrion +6, 151132 +7, Superstevefive +6, Luna_Flina +35, malad +6, Hyoros -8, Legojack +9

Apologies for the shoddy Translation the translator i hired to do this work seems to not be of the highest grade might need to hire a better one next time.

Base +5

well, at least I can understand all of it

Base +4, Hyoros +8

Year late, but whatever.

I don't think it's just the translation issue here. It's also an issue on this artist's art style and drawings. He needs to learn proper anatomy.

Base +4

This doujin had quite the creative way to use Kurumi's time powers via a save point

Base +6, Hyoros +13

RAW /g/783875/b1127980b3/

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