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Great job on translating the third volume of this series so soon after you completed the second one. Two releases in less than a week -- that's faster than some mainstream scanlation groups out there!

As in the case of your previous release, I like the way you've translated the dialogue. I checked on the raws, and saw that you did a quite few embellishments to the speech, which is probably why it sounds so "natural". For example, instead of translating いただきます simply as "Let's eat!", you expanded it to say "Oh boy, breakfast! Let's eat!", which sounds more natural.

People who insist on strict word-for-word translations may frown on embellishments, but I, for one, like them if they make the dialogue flow smoothly without changing what the speaker is trying to say.

Nicely done, and another 5/5 stars from me. Oh, and I really like how you phrased the title as "The Perils of Kyoko".

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awesome and quick work MisterJ167. Thank You

Just confused on the order of this doujin.

LOL the last dialogue is quite typical. "Slave Deal for 2 Months.....Yeah Right" Hentai Logic

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This is very Fast! Thanks

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@meow_pao:

Thanks for the kind words. I try hard not to be so literal when translating, what's important to me is the flow of the conversation. Also, with all due respect to other translators, nobody in the world says "fufu".

This particular hentai isn't normally my style, it's a pretty straightforward blackmail/rape story (yes, with typical "hentai logic"), but I do like the artwork and the raws were very clean and the text was easy to pick up. Also the dialogue was very simple really, very typical of a lot of hentai, so the translation wasn't particularly difficult. Keep in mind I don't speak but a few words of Japanese, I rely on machine translations and making my best guess. It helps that I'm familiar with the characters...

Of course everyone is welcome to see my other translations, as you've noticed, I'm a particular fan of "Maison Ikkoku", a show that's not particularly well-known. I'm glad people enjoy the work.

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In 2 months she will be even worst lol.

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When is the release of the next chapter?

Thanks

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No idea when he'll do the next one, but I promise you as soon as it's available here I'll translate it

OK it looks like part 4 will be released in early January, I will keep everyone posted

He's finished it, as soon as someone posts the raw file here I'll translate it
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=198043&adult_view=1

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The title is wrong. This is number 3. It's not a problem when you've read it, but when looking at the artist's combined works and you see there's a part 4 and 5 it's a bit confusing.

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