I would prefer if the author dragged it out more - she was "discovered" too quick.

Base +2, KCzz15 +18, conundrum +11, jfragrettel +7, Clamstatic +6, johnsacarsm +6

I love this artist. Fun bondage play without the unnecessary power fantasy rape.

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One week later in that suit she developed necrosis and we had to amputate her. True story.

Base +12, conundrum -11, finnick8 -7, Rango532 +6, jfragrettel +7, neosuduno -15, Clamstatic +6, MagusOld -6, Pirokoro -6, Sitek -6, Tilly -7, CraftyCat3 -5

CrowKarasu, May I suggest instead of placing an Irritating white box on the transparent-bubble dialog, you could instead use the manga temple font (http://www.dafont.com/manga-temple.font) with white strokes.
other than that, Good Job!
Cheers!

Base +6, jfragrettel +7, johnsacarsm +6, yybb2 +7

Usually a story like this would involve rape or the woman not consenting to this. I like this. It's refreshing.

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Too eager for my tastes, but i can't complain since at least this time tit proportions where not ridiculously huge and she actually had more to say than "cock cock cock" in the end

9/10

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