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(C96) [Tiramisu Tart (Kazuhiro)] Kanojo no Ane wa Gal de Bitch de Yariman de [English] [CGrascal]

(C96) [てぃらみすたると (一弘)] 彼女の姉はギャルでビッチでヤリマンで [英訳]

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Posted:2019-09-21 13:53
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Language:English  TR
File Size:67.80 MB
Length:32 pages
Favorited:3029 times
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Posted on 21 September 2019, 14:11 UTC by:   synpyre    PM
Score +53
Hot, but bad sister. Bad.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 15:05 UTC by:   KoroshiXLelouch    PM
Score +733
My happiness was turned to tears when I saw the translator. How the fuck do you not improve in over 10 years?
Posted on 21 September 2019, 15:12 UTC by:   Schmand    PM
Score +173
This was so vanilla that it took me 18 pages to realize that it's from Kazuhiro.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 15:12 UTC by:   hafini    PM
Score +261
Feeling weird reading Kazuhiro works with zero anal.

Bombshell gyaru is uber hot though.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 15:29 UTC by:   Look A Moth    PM
Score +11
Awesome stuff, love Kazuhiro

Still waiting for this to be translated though /g/1183656/6f2adbf912/
Posted on 21 September 2019, 15:38 UTC by:   Rmdh    PM
Score +40
why does she looks like birdo in page 11
Posted on 21 September 2019, 17:52 UTC by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +140
@KoroshiXLelouch
because people are still willing to pay for his work.
one had to admire his consistency and persistence against criticism and improvements though, it's legendary at this point. /s

@MaouMaou
try reading his works from before EH (that makes it something like from 14 years ago I guess?) and this one.
Ralethh made a good explanation there.
Last edited on 22 September 2019, 18:26 UTC.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 20:20 UTC by:   MaouMaou    PM
Score +110
@ncc1701z

Honest question, why does CGrascal get all this hate? I've seen a lot of his work and it doesn't look that bad.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 23:02 UTC by:   Ralethh    PM
Score +285
@MaouMaou
The problem with CGrascal is that his work is passable enough to make you wonder how it is that it's still only just passable after all this time. One would figure he'd improve after all this time, but somehow, his translations are always still littered with typos, translation, and syntax errors. It's not so egregious that it's unreadable, but it falls in a really annoying middle ground where you're able to be distracted by it if you have even an elementary school level understanding of the English language.
Posted on 21 September 2019, 23:08 UTC by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +19
Aw, but Yui is so cute though.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 00:48 UTC by:   herrkaizer    PM
Score +33
Why was the poor grammar tag nixed? It's a passable translation, but there are easily a dozen errors. And that's not counting all the superfluous commas.
Also Reina turned into goddamn Birdo on page 11.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 01:37 UTC by:   antareja987    PM
Score +6
This reminds me of that AIKA av.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 01:46 UTC by:   ghost_of_sanakan    PM
Score +13
@antareja987

AIKA, the gyaru AV actress? How is her work anyway? What themes does she do?
Posted on 22 September 2019, 01:58 UTC by:   LRaglan    PM
Score +29
@herrkaizer Because of the requirements for the tag probably. Nobody bothered actually listing what the problems are.

"Description: Any 3rd party translation containing at least 10 grammatical or spelling errors per 40 pages.
Notes: A gallery comment MUST detail the mistakes otherwise the tag is invalid."
Posted on 22 September 2019, 02:37 UTC by:   herrkaizer    PM
Score +216
@LRaglan Like this:
Pg 3: I want to go to the same university with you, Yuuki-kun.---> I want to go to the same university as you, Yuuki-kun.
Pg 3: You can use that formula that was taught to us in class.---> You can use that formula we learned in class.
Pg 3: I only got this big body.---> I have only got this big body/I only have this big body.
Pg 3: Are you even interested in someone like me?---> Why are you even interested in someone like me? // Given Yui's statement on the next page, the why is necessary.
Pg 4: I want us to get along even more.---> I want us to get along more.
Pg 6: I was thinking about what type of person she was.---> I was thinking about what type of person she is. // Reina isn't dead.
Pg 6: You students are studying?---> Are you students studying?
Pg 6: You deceive me by saying he's a friend this morning.---> You deceived me by saying he's a friend this morning.
Pg 6: And why are you here!---> And why are you here?!
Pg 7: Why are you talking with Yuuki-kun, Onee-chan!---> Why are you talking with Yuuki-kun, Onee-chan?!
Pg 8: But, I came by her house. But, nothing happened.---> I came by her house, but nothing happened.
Pg 8: If it was possible, then I wanted to be lovers with her for just a bit.---> If it was possible, I wanted to be lovers with her for just a bit.
Pg 10: Stealing my sister's boyfriend's virginity first is getting me fired up.---> Stealing my sister's boyfriend's virginity is getting me fired up. // Could substitute first time for virginity.
Pg 11: You got such a huge cock?---> You have such a huge cock?/You have got such a huge cock? // Given Reina's speech pattern it should be, 'You've got such a huge cock?"

Ah screw this. This is just the first eleven pages. And this doesn't even cover syntax, or the friggen commas used willy-nilly.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 03:08 UTC by:   LRaglan    PM
Score +46
Pretty much, yeah. And that's why that tag doesn't get used anywhere near enough. When it's needed, it's honestly just a lot more work than it's worth going through.
Posted on 22 September 2019, 15:52 UTC by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +18
Sexy gal girl with sexy anus...No anal. Fuck.
Posted on 23 September 2019, 11:27 UTC by:   sumea    PM
Score +6
The speech bubble cleanup is a little bit rough, was wiping my screen for dirt that was not there a lot lol.
Posted on 23 September 2019, 13:16 UTC by:   milk940    PM
Score +33
Do not understand all the hate towards translator, I mean it is normal if English is his/her second language.
Posted on 23 September 2019, 15:29 UTC by:   Noeleo    PM
Score +32
@milk940 then he should stick to normal tier stuff instead of this legendary tier stuff.

Also, maybe he should hire people to become his proofreader/QC. Ez profit.
Posted on 24 September 2019, 05:30 UTC by:   Arcoirys    PM
Score +15
thanks >w<
Posted on 25 September 2019, 02:28 UTC by:   Asmo Deus    PM
Score +17
I find it funny how he told the older sister no at first. Like, dude, with how sex seems your primary goal and expectation for interacting with her, it's obvious that you're not in the relationship for love.
Posted on 26 September 2019, 10:50 UTC by:   DeviHyuga    PM
Score +35
At least CGrascal isnt as bad EZ Rewriter :/
Posted on 26 October 2019, 02:09 UTC by:   ChristianDad    PM
Score +3
ya know when I'm rubbing a load out to kazuhiro, I don't pay attention to the grammar or who translated it. youse all need to fkn relax aye
Posted on 16 November 2019, 11:05 UTC by:   KingXander    PM
Score +7
"You got" is grammatically incorrect, but is commonly used. I think it sounds more natural than you've got and certainly you have got given who's saying it.
Posted on 27 November 2019, 02:44 UTC by:   geemergary    PM
Score +7
This is such a wasted opportunity of big sis not forcing tightly wound younger sis to fuck her boyfriend. So sad.
Posted on 08 December 2019, 01:25 UTC by:   hamon13    PM
Score +7
Don't be loud or my sister will ear us!

*Proceeds to scream like a pig*
Posted on 31 January 2020, 14:47 UTC by:   l2ose    PM
Score +15
ENG: /g/1487957/971dfc6371/ [CGrascal] <== You are here~
ENG: /g/1528809/b40e0bf57e/ [incogna777]
KOR: /g/1485447/2501e7685c/
CHN: /g/1489115/55bacfff93/
ESP: /g/1525141/8c50b4e145/ [K.A. Works]
THA: /g/1528399/3d8df4c947/

RAW: /g/1477965/3e9e1686d9/
RAW: /g/1483740/b0d9122401/

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