A gyaru can open your eyes. A bitch can set you straight. A slut can bring you pleasure. But only a gyaru bitch slut can make you the man you were meant to be.

I have found another translation marked with the "poor grammar" tag, with mournful wailing in its comments' section that a proper translation might never be released. So I tried my hand at it. I was looking to capture the tone, humor, and idiomatic writing used in the original work. I hope the dialogue came out sounding both more natural and more fun.

Let me know what you think and let me know if my typesetting (which tends to be my blind spot, as I work alone) is up to par. Thanks in advance, and enjoy!

sounds like best sister to me
also that wot on p17 looks really nice

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Page 11

Did the Doujin just become self aware?

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@hjerry It's just the "funny" translation.

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@incogna777 Thank you for the translation. I was one of the wailers of the first version, and yours is so much better. I love that the characters have their own speech quirks, it does so much to elevate it from the normally sterile hentai dialogue.
As an aside, where did you get the pages from?

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This was great, I needed a good laugh with my fap

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Fucking Hell, this is amazing!
One thing I always appreciate is when I can laugh when I fap.
Sometimes, it makes it impossible to cum, but I still love a laugh.
Definitely great to see this re-done and improved SO much!
Love it!
BLESS you for this, incogna!

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@hjerry In the original, she asks if she should call what she's doing rape or netorare, in what seemed to me like a genre-savvy aside.

@herrkaizer I just used the the original Japanese, stripped the text, cleaned the panels, and connected some of the broken lines around in-panel speech bubbles.

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page 12 that face what the fuck？

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>Geez Louise
>Betch
>Yuuki-kins
>Unknot the damn panties butchering of "don't get your panties in a bunch/twist" idom
This really isn't that much better than the other one. Not only is it overly localized, It's badly done at that.
Don't rewrite dialog.

Last edited on 06 December 2019, 18:57 UTC.

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@Qmycc
Not a fan of duckface ? Well, guess not.

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Only skimmed it, will read it later, but I don't think this should be labelled as NTR. It is cheating, but as the girl the MC is interested in is completely unaware it does not become NTR as per the tag definition.

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"a Gyaru, a Bitch, and a Slut" Nobody's perfect. A sentence that should also be used for this "translation'.

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With this kind of sister. My other head will decide.

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Came for the tits, stayed for the memes. Now that's good writing!

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