I don't speak or japanese but I use google translante.

Always nice to see someone new scanlating and showing some works to a broader audience. :)

But to be honest, the result is not of high quality :(
So I suggest you should ›ask for help‹, at least for a native English proofreader. Or maybe it would be better to translate to Portugese instead?
I didn't check the Japanese raw, but Google Translate usually doesn't give good results. I would use it only for easy works that consist of less plot, as it would be a pity if something important got lost in the process.
And for the editing, you also should ask for advice. We have many skilled editors at the forums, surely someone can help you. :)

So if you had fun scanlating, don't take my comment as reason to stop, but as motivation to strive for higher quality. I'm not sure if it will work out with Google Translate, but at least the English and editing should be improvable with some work. I'm looking forward to an improved version 1.1 :D

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entiendes espa~ol mejor? traduce en tu idioma original mejor y busca ayuda para traducir, de todos modos gracias por tu aporte

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Please get a proofreader.

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it's better if we can see the sex scene :))))))))))))))

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@A0_

It's not even a proofreader at this point, it's a proper translator.

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...I'll just stick to the raws...

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Don't ever "translate" anything ever again.

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"I don't speak or japanese but I use google translante."

oh boy, great font choice.

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Don't kid yourself, anyone posting "translations" like this knows exactly what they're doing.

Stick it back up your ass you halfass Goatse impersonator. This isn't even good enough troll to actually be annoying instead of just sad.

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I have posted a better translation.
I made it a month or two ago for myself, because i wanted it, but never uploaded it. Now that i see this, i've uploaded my version.

/g/1402404/8091415ba9/

its not 100% perfectly translated, I also used goggle translate for the Japanese, but I know English, and I tried to make sense of things...
admittedly , the admittedly my font formatting isn't much better...

Last edited on 22 April 2019, 20:17 UTC.

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This is Zero Wing levels of translation.

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