The story continues. Just how cucked can one man get?

We also (seemingly) find out who Iida was fucking on page 2 in the first volume. Looks like this story is at least somewhat planned out. Also, nice shirt on page 86, buddy.

Translation, cleaning, redrawing & typesetting by me. Enjoy!

RAW: /g/1509616/d39193ce3c/
Vol. 1 (ENG): /g/1316745/f7e1d72f0c/

At least MC can have sex with the girl he loves in this story... Wouldn't be this lucky in other works...

Base +12, zephyrslow +6, iso_alc +7, HorridGuest +16, kondoriyano +6, hafini +11, Riyin +7, mtoinkognito +7, Narutlih +6, rotar zairo +10, Lostalgia +9, immortal rain +6, IncognitoMaud +6, and 14 more...

I can tell the author is a woman. They always make the best sex scene.

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Been waiting for this translation. Thanks.

Base +6, TheOldDeus +7

Mc is a nice guy but the girls just want dick and be dicked they are granted by assholes.

Base +7, Trooper400 +9, Smokeman99 +6, Surviva -6, Orengestar +7, TheOldDeus +7, ExtremeRampage +1, 58569 +9, pokey1 +6, waltergeist -10, HNTI +30, Fofotron +6

Thank you so much ! I just hope the author doesnt fail us with the next part

Base +2, cyril99 +6, TheOldDeus +7

The girls are just nymphomaniac Is there even love in this story? XD

Base +6, Fofotron +6, Trooper400 +9, rising11 +9, Taichi master +7, bigmak +6, TheOldDeus +7, MitchTheGreat +7, mikuruz +7, ExtremeRampage +1, pokey1 +6

And the story will become more of a mess it already is guys.

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plot twist! really hurts me when seeing mc is actually can stand up to himself just that he lacked the courage to tell her he likes her

Base +6, Fofotron +6, jere512 +6, TheOldDeus +7, 58569 +9, Kasmow +6

at least mc has taste the girl, bitter sweet reunion will be good plot

Base +6, LovingCivilian +4, Brego1 +6, Surviva -6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, mikuruz +7

Can’t wait to see if there’s gonna be any gang bang happening in the third volume. Anyone wanna bet? lol

Base +7, Surviva +6, TheOldDeus +7

Seeing both MCs getting cucked makes the story worth it

Base +14, Trooper400 +9, TheOldDeus +7, Kumochi -6, Yukipo~ +6

I thought there was gonna be a bit of drama or inner turmoil with the girls but they're just there to get fucked.

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I always tend to sympathize with the guys in these stories, but man do I feel extra bad for this one. You get your ass beat to stop the girls from being raped, and they pretty much just stop talking to you. And the girls from all appearance just want to have sex from their lack of resistance to the guy at the end.

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Still disappointed in this chapter. I hope vol. 3 is more like the first chapter, but looking at the author twitter it seems like she’s a bit delusional. Looks like she’s brushing off criticism as just “haters” and only responds to comments that suck up to her. I get the feeling she saw Seto Yuki latest series and decided to change up at the last second, probably explains the second half of this volume different tone.

Base +6, Trooper400 +9, Surviva -6, jere512 +6, bigmak +6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, 58569 +9, Janus_auron -6, surevalla -6, Vivi1993 +16

noice, time to coom

Base +6, TheOldDeus +7, qwertz789 -6

lmao @ page 86

even the mc's shirt knows what's up

Base +10, IncognitoMaud +6, Surviva +6, TheOldDeus +7, hentafag +6, Fofotron +6, the lummox +10

Wait, so who was fucking lida on the first page of vol. 1?
Also, is this before or after the first page of vol. 1? Totally lost.

Base +6, TheOldDeus +7

Like the CUC<OLD T-Shirt, nice touch.

Base +6, Surviva +6, TheOldDeus +7, aych001 +6, ExtremeRampage +1, hentafag +6, Fofotron +6

@OBV
Yeah, kinda makes it even worse in a sense. Instead of just longing after her and never getting together with the female love interest, the MC actually comes really close to getting the girl of his dreams, only to have it all come crashing down and ending up TRIPLE cucked - once by the baldy who kept banging her all throughout the MC's stint at cram school, second time by the rapists who caused the group to break up, and finally by the new dude who just alpha'd his way into the love interest's pants and banged her raw literally hours after they met. I'm almost dreading the third part at this point.

@dbkan
It's implied that the guy at the beginning of vol. 1 is the new dude (Kazuki) because he's the only one who calls her Riho-chan. The other guys call her Iida. That page looks to be a time skip to the end of the story, so probably the next volume.

@Kevin9noob
Not up to date with the author's works myself, but this definitely felt like two stories crammed into one volume with a very weird transition in the middle (the sudden festival rape part). I mean, the two male MC's are totally absent in the later part altogether and this random guy is just dropped into the story. At any rate, I'm really curious to see how it all concludes, for better or worse.

Base +26, dirtyhairry +20, Orengestar +7, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, allelujahhaptism +6, 58569 +9, ExtremeRampage +1, Vivi1993 +16, xxMemeKing420xx +6

the fact that this guy isn't malicious at all and doesn't really realize he's NTRing his bro REALLY gets to me, it's very refreshing though, lol

Base +6, dirtyhairry +20, Surviva +6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, allelujahhaptism +6, 58569 +9, ExtremeRampage +1

NTR by rape is boring

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Awesome by all means, this is the real life.

Base +6, dirtyhairry +20, akunoko -24, Surviva +6, sureok1 +11, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, huntethan2 +6

theexile
They barely do have standards, so I don't see that happening. Chino and Riho slept with two average-looking acquaintances, and an attractive stranger. But they were against having sex with those thugs who were neither trustworthy nor attractive. You need at least one of those two qualities.

Based on Chino's dejected face in the beginning of the first volume, we're more likely to see Riho pair up with Kazuki. Meanwhile, Takashi is out of the picture due to resuming baseball, and we have no idea what's going to happen to Kousei and Chino.

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Base +23, dirtyhairry +20, Surviva +6, TheOldDeus +7, Drode +10

I seriously hope not, but I fear the guy who actually tried to defend the girls from getting raped, even though he had no way of winning, is going to end up with the worst possible ending. Let's face it, the author will probably give Kousei the typical cuck treatment (e.g. ending up with a girl who's not that into him, or worse, who also cheats behind his back).

So I really hope against all odds that Kousei is going to get red pilled to such an extent that he moves on and finds himself a girl who's actually100% into him.

Base +6, dirtyhairry +20, Surviva -6, akunoko +24, jere512 +6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, 58569 +9, huntethan2 -6, ExtremeRampage +1, cochrane +22

@friggo
Check her other work on this site, the one about the parallel world crap, you'll get a headache with such stupid series. And that's how she rolls, I never expect coherence from the author and you shouldn't either.

@aurabolt
Chino realised she fucked up by making Kousei's love interest(Roho) hook up with Kazuki as her sex toy, she likely got dumped because she was outside next to Kousei.

@Forgunia
Agreed, why settle with a slut with no standards? Literally anyway cam fuck her and she'll be OK with it as long as it has a dick.

Base +20, akunoko +24, Surviva -6, jere512 +6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, 58569 +9, ExtremeRampage +1, cochrane +22

dude really needs to move on, theres no point fighting in a lost cause.

Base +6, jere512 +6, akunoko +24, TheOldDeus +7, 58569 +9, huntethan2 -6, cochrane +22

If I really had a hand on all the cultural differences in Japan verses those in the west, I would probably have a better understanding of the social nuances in this story. I do know that things like rape, can be a social black hole, just as much for the victim.

Base +12, TheOldDeus +7, Canadense_1 +5

Just skipping all through saving the images for tonight. But oh boy, another chad surface? I dont get it anymore, please have a heart of steel MC. :'D

Base +6, TheOldDeus +7

Bro she's clearly a whore just find someone else

Base +6, Talesofgracesf +6, gaarahugger +6, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, ExtremeRampage +1, Kasmow +6

Damn that shirt and that lack of commitment from mc fits perfectly, girls are a textbook example of easy going gals.

Base +5, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6, ExtremeRampage +1, Kasmow +6

Thanks for the translation! I never thought this would get done so quickly so I'm quite happy.
Unfortunately we'll probably have wait another year for volume 3. The wait is gonna draaaaaaaaaaag......

Base +6, TheOldDeus +7, Canadense_1 -5

@ friggo

Just one more thing: In the rapists part, MC actually saved black hair girl (only tip in but not whole dog?) and ended up blonde and black hair went for an alpha dude. Cheers :D

Base +12, TheOldDeus +7, Fofotron +6

bitches aint shit but hoes and tricks

Base +6, qwertz789 +6, Pathosz +2, TheOldDeus +7, ExtremeRampage +1

There are multiple lessons to learn from this story

1) Don't be a pussy and speak up your mind if something is bothering you, the MC lost the chance to fuck the girl he likes because of that in the beginning.

2) Be smart and don't just get into fights that you can't win, especially for girls that don't deserve it, or you would just get your ass kicked . The girls only started screaming long after, instead of immediately , when the rapists started beating the MC. Not to mention, they didn't resist much to the rapists or call others for help, which shows they don't really deserve to be saved.

3) Pick your friends carefully or they would let you down when the need arises.The baldy not only acted as a selfish prick when he kept fucking both of the girls by himself, even though he knew the MC was stuck at cram school, but he also kept sending him pictures as if he likes to rub his nose in it. He might be forgiven for taking the virginities of the girls as the MC did nothing to object back then, but it's unforgivable that he did nothing when his friend got beaten up or when the girls were about to be raped. Even if he is a pussy he could at least run to bring help.

4) Once a slut, always a slut. While the black haired girl acted more innocent and shy towards the MC she turned into a full blown slut just like her friend. It didn't take much convincing from the alpha guy to make the two bitches to jump on his dick. The smart thing to do is to walk away from the sluts after fucking them as they are no relationship material. Of course since this is a NTR scenario the MC will try to get the girl back only to suffer more at the end.

5) When you create a NTR scenario of having the girl stolen by someone close to the MC stick with it. Creating ass pull events like suddenly appearing rapists or an alpha guy to steal the girl makes your NTR worse , not better. Seto Yuuki's similar ongoing NTR story, Chitose, is much better compared to this one in that regard.

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@ bergil

Could not agree more with no 3. But as a reader pov, its really frustrating to see mc still clinging with his "first sight love". God only know only despair waiting on him. B-but I know from his gaze, this guy can do it. Go go Mc-kun Go GOGO!

Base +6, ExtremeRampage +1

Has this story like to pretend it is realistic.

Well, the MC is an idiot and not for being a cuck, I think everyone here, at least the Western guys to learn that the girl we like is really a whore, we would stop feeling something for her.

That's why he is an idiot, he should just go ahead and dodge the bullet, with a little luck he would find a more decent girl.

Base +4, ExtremeRampage +1, cochrane +22, TheOldDeus +7, Kasmow +6, Fofotron +6

yo this ntr is too realistic for me dog i can't read this shit.

Base +6, pilot05 +6, TheOldDeus +7, eman182 +6, ExtremeRampage +1, Fofotron +6

oh for fuck's sake! this one started out original but by ch2 is already back to the typical ntr standard cliche. smh...

Base +8, nurd -6, cochrane +22, TheOldDeus +7

I thought i know where i was going but this is too much, God i never ask for favors but please let it end with a "happy ending" T-T

Base +6, ExtremeRampage +1

Is there going to be a vol 3 or is this it?
If there is I think how it might go is that Niiyama is going to help get Iida NTR, if she already isn’t, with the guy that she’s already infatuated and it might be because of the festival scene. She already knows Yamagishi has a crush on Iida and even help try to help him, but because even if it’s for a moment she got rape and as Iida was about to get rape that’s when he tried to jump in to save them but mostly to save Iida. While they have no romantic interest with each other she probably feel they are at least really close friends consider what the 4 of them been doing, but he left her to get raped but only took action when Iida was about to be raped. I think that’s how it might go. Hell when Iida is already NTR to the guy they’re with she might invite him to to show him.
[Edit]: Lol after read some of the comments I went back and looks back at vol.1 on the first page and half of what I said might be right at least for now, I think. They only thing that’s debatable is about Niiyama on whether she was kicked to the curb by the guy she seems to have an infatuation or not. I hope that first page is like those movie that shows you the middle to end of the film and when it gets to that point hopeful we get something different maybe a happy ending but that’s probably doubtful.

Last edited on 29 December 2019, 22:16 UTC.

Base +7

I'm not so sure about the direction this story is heading. I'm really not a fan of the introductions of these third parties. I preferred it when it was just them. Though I guess it's the next arc since there's only so much you can do with just the four of them that hasn't already been explored. Also, that part where they just drift apart left a bad taste in my mouth. He got his ass kicked trying to save you and you're not even gonna check up on him!? The one time this piece of cardboard has his hero moment and that's how it ends up!

Base +7

What a rollercoaster ride, haha.
great though.

Base +12

@iCraveThatPorn

If the MC is such a wimp, as you say, how come he risked his ass to stop the rapists even though he was clearly outnumbered ? This doesn't look like something a wimp would do.

Base +6, luckcrazy +6

Based on this work alone, I like the artist a lot. She can create good characters, draw very beautiful sex scenes, and keep up the tension within every scene. Most of this (but not all) she manages while keeping it as realistic as sex stories get.

When the quartet actually got started in the first volume she was rushing the story badly. Probably she felt she had no resources to draw all the pages needed for a decent setup. Also, many potential readers could abandon a good story if the first volume had too few pages with tits and pussies.

What she really needs is a good editor at an "alternative" publishing house. Somebody firm enough to tell her when she’s making mistakes and, before all, to teach her how to build up a well-paced, coherent story from her top-notch scenes, because that is what she has not mastered so far. Content-wise, she should absolutely not be pushed towards the mainstream (any mainstream). She is already maintaining a fine, refreshing balance on the border of NTR pornography and more traditional relationship drama.

Personally, I would like to see some more character development through real discussions between the characters. Even though those are lacking, I feel that we have gotten a pretty good idea of most personalities involved. The main exception is Riho Iida; we have learned little about her emotions and deepest motivations, and she keeps giving mixed signals to everybody around her. Well, yeah, based on the first volume, she sure is hornier and more curious about sex than she superficially appears to be. Still, I believe we are missing something very essential about her, and I do hope the third volume gives us some answers. (I am genuinely surprised no one had made this point above.)

Base +8

This is a 5 out of 5 stars, even got better during the last few pages. Amazing!

Base +12

pg 96 onwards is a mess in story writing, made me care less about the girls as characters and more as cum doormats.
Only cared about baldie in Vol. 1 but author turned him to an arrogant prick and a wimp in fighting back.
Kazuki standing up against the rapists is the only good moment he got in the entire story but he just returns to his cardboard state of doing fucking nothing for the girl he likes again

Last edited on 18 May 2020, 10:56 UTC.

Base +6

I wasn t ready for this. The rape scene killed me.

Base +6

At least this author makes the women believable. I understand the artist is a female. It takes one to know one.

Base +5

Well, in my eyes, the short-haired guy was the MVP, the real MC. He was getting the screen time, helped the beta cuck get laid in vol 1 (let us face it, without the alpha's help our beta cuck would never get to fuck either of the girls) and was not even trying to be malicious. I could look at him as the "true hero" of the story and ignore the dumb beta cuck MC. But this new rape and random guy in a forst development makes me sad. Both MCs are getting cucked. Rly? Let me guess, in vol 3 this new alpha will also get cucked. And our beta MC will go from a cuck squared to a cuck cubed by then.

Base +9

@Agmastiftva You should cut down on your daily dosage of red pill and stop using the words alpha and beta every two seconds. It makes you look dumb.

Base +6